Diary Entry - 4

I have now completed our first edit of our Film Noir opening, we recieved some feedback after showing it to the class, and some of the suggestions we recieved were to:

• Brighten up darker scenes
• Use a voice over at the starting chat scene, instead of the diagetic sounds.
• Use titles when the two characters are walking down the street (As this takes a while) and the use of titles should keep it interesting.

We have decided to take all of these suggestions into account, and try to incorporate all of them into our second, or final draft of our Film Noir.